An Ache
A constant ache of longing of desire
To feel the warm along my face
To feel your fingers in my cold hands
An awkward silent exchange of feelings
A Quiet Desire
A loving loneliness
A quiet end
An Ache A constant ache of longing of desire To feel the warm along my face To feel your fingers in my cold hands An awkward silent exchange of feelings A Quiet Desire A loving loneliness A quiet end |
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Here the Tragically Beautiful
And the Beautifully tragic
Drift through this night
In a last Quest for magic
-- trans-siberian orchestra "the lost christmas eve"
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i loved this! keep the good work...
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You had to break me, so that I could make me.
Take a look at me now.
L3. I think it's a wrong word. Try "warmth" instead of "warm", and "upon" instead of "along".
I think punctuations will work well with this piece. But I'm not in the position to judge much. So, ignore me. Otherwise, it's a good description of feelings. Well done.
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Coffee makes my world go round and round till i get dizzy and fall off-me ☃
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