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Misery by ~loversheart:iconloversheart:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Spoken Word




I will leave everything in your hands
my heart
my love and
my soul
because otherwise it all dies tonight
as an empty shell roams the earth
my love for you is intense enough to make dreams of death when not quelched
my soul longs to be twinned with your as it slowly fades away
my heart beats only when hearing your sweet voice and words caress my ear
may you keep them close and dear
may they serve you well as they have only caused me misery
i am tired of living yet i can not die
so i am shutting down
no more thoughts
nor shall i any longer cry
the daily pain the daily torment the endless suffering
of losing the only girl in on the world that i loved
with ever fiber of my being
every inch of my soul
and every last beat of my heart
it is to much for me to bear
so i trust you with them
and hope they...
serve you better then i have
my dearest love
for i have died
©2008-2009 ~loversheart
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~NHL456Dani Sep 24, 2008, 8:36:36 PM
aww:heart:
it matches me in a way
beautiful words
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!Dyingunderurwings Sep 24, 2008, 9:13:48 PM
its a very emotional poem. I can honestly say I have felt that way many times over a particular person. I sank into darkness for a long time, just lingering in the moonless night, eventually there were some stars, but nothing worth being wrapped up about. Until one moment i open my eyes wide to a bright light and realized I will be ok. What i am saying is I hope, somehow you will open your eyes and feel no more pain and continue to live on as the person i grew to cherish.
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~ATeenageWitchling Sep 25, 2008, 3:24:37 AM
Sometimes I wish I could give my feelings to someone, but knowing they'll never take them breaks more than just my feelings...
Beautiful bittersweet poem :heart: The second to last line is like a last hint of suspense...like the last beat of a heart...or a pause to hesitate. And it's 3 powerful words, too. I'd hafta say that's my favorite line. And everything else is amazing as well~! :+favlove::love:

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~inuyashakagome10 Oct 9, 2008, 11:04:05 PM
:hug: love you to death. :smooch:beautiful as always^^
~kitty

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~The-Shy-Vampire Oct 11, 2008, 10:18:27 AM
i love you so much i wish i could taalk to you

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Mood: Hopeless ~Akemi-Ayura Oct 18, 2008, 11:43:44 AM
Have you ever experience words that seem to be yours on another's tongue? It's not the exact line of thought but similar to what I've wrote of before. I always loved when a poem struck me hard on the heart or mind. And this one struck my heart several times on each line. Thank you for writing such a poem. Some people fail with words while others abound in them. It helps those that lack when those that have abundance share their wealth with words.

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~edsgirl18 Mar 3, 2009, 7:37:03 PM
wow that is beautiful u are every good at writing these poems

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Mood: Love ~blackmoongirl Mar 9, 2009, 3:07:54 PM
Very beautiful indeed I shall definety fav

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